good job
Jean Michel Jarre meets early Depeche mode... well, it really does sound like that :) For your first submission, it's very good... only thing I don't like are the drums... I miss some kind of groove and that will be propably because of lack of the percussions... it's only kick and snare, which is not very healthy :) Try adding at least some hi-hats next time... percussions are very little, but they do very much :)
Anyways, keep up the good work and most importantly, have fun !
5/5; 10/10
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